This fix is for when you have a completed scene in your story that’s not doing what you need it to. I’ll help you diagnose the issue and devise a fix that will make it work. WARNING: sometimes the best fix is to move or even delete a scene entirely.

Here’s how it works: you submit your scene as written and answer some questions about what you want it to do for your story. I’ll provide you with a scene revision PLUS a 30-minute conversation over the phone or video chat. I’ll do my best to make the scene fit with your style as best I can discern it.