Fix: Broken Scene

Fix: Broken Scene


You’ve got a scene that just isn’t clicking. Something doesn’t feel right but you’re not sure what to do about it. My Broken Scene fix is just the thing to get your scene tuned up and turned out.

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This fix is for when you have a completed scene in your story that’s not doing what you need it to. I’ll help you diagnose the issue and devise a fix that will make it work. WARNING: sometimes the best fix is to move or even delete a scene entirely.

Here’s how it works: you submit your scene as written and answer some questions about what you want it to do for your story. I’ll provide you with a scene revision PLUS a 30-minute conversation over the phone or video chat. I’ll do my best to make the scene fit with your style as best I can discern it.